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Scoot's avatar

This is unbelievable. I dont know how you did it, but by golly this was a blast to read. I got embarassingly far before i realized what was happening. Stellar work—Merry Christmas!

Jack Nagy's avatar

Merry Christmas, Scoot! I'm glad you like it — and don't worry, I didn't realise what was happening until near the end either!

Cade Robinet's avatar

Very cool story man! Probably among the best things I’ve read on here.

Jack Nagy's avatar

Thank you, Cade!

Jessica Neal's avatar

Jack, this was incredible!! I was hooked! Well done bud 🤗 merry Christmas to you and J ❤️

Jack Nagy's avatar

Merry Christmas to you as well and thank you for the kind words! With love, J&J ❤️

Keith Long's avatar

So crazy and so good.

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

Ong this is so awesome!! But now I wanna know what happens on the other side! 😱🙌

Jack Nagy's avatar

Thank you Emily. ☺️ And thanks again for organising this!

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

No problem, it was such a blast! 🤘

Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I've read this story twice. I got the Adam reference. I think i got the ending, but i did get the love part. Good job, Jack.

Jack Nagy's avatar

Thanks Joseph!

Yeah, the ending is pretty much exactly what it seems to be, I'm sure you got it!

There's a sneaky "Eve" reference in there too, though. 😉

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Jack Nagy's avatar

Thanks, Eileen!